Black lightning
A police officer turned up the TV in the police station waiting room, and the room went silent as they all listened to the news.
“The 100, a thriving gang in Freeland fought back at protesters who were trying to win back their streets. Police say two protesters were found dead and four were in critical condition, the gang MUST be stopped.”
Jefferson looked angry, as the principal of Garfield High and a citizen involved with stopping gang violence, another protest turned into violence was incredibly bad news.
I am making a story based on my favorite shows, and this is the first paragraph. I enjoyed making this because I like the story line of the series and I like making things more dramatic. I think I could work using a different variety of words instead of repeating the same words.
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