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Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Tuesday, June 29, 2021

Black lightning, Paragraph one

 Black lightning

A police officer turned up the TV in the police station waiting room, and the room went silent as they all listened to the news. 

“The 100, a thriving gang in Freeland fought back at protesters who were trying to win back their streets. Police say two protesters were found dead and four were in critical condition, the gang MUST be stopped.”

Jefferson looked angry, as the principal of Garfield High and a citizen involved with stopping gang violence, another protest turned into violence was incredibly bad news.


I am making a story based on my favorite shows, and this is the first paragraph. I enjoyed making this because I like the story line of the series and I like making things more dramatic. I think I could work using a different variety of words instead of repeating the same words.
Thank you for reading my blog post !!!

Wednesday, June 16, 2021

Letter to jacinda!

In literacy We have been looking at matariki and what it's all about. One of the compulsory tasks we had to do was writing a letter to Jacinda Ardern to make Matariki a public holiday.

I think I did good at giving reasons why it should be a public holiday.. but I need to work on my punctuation and capital letter. We didn't end up sending the letter's obviously, because we still need some work on writing a formal letter,but anyways...thank you for taking the time to read my blog post!!

Tuesday, March 2, 2021

America's cup teamwork poster :)

For literacy I had to make a poster for 10 teamwork tips that would be good for any team. I liked making it because it was fast and easy and it made me do alot of thinking.







Sunday, November 3, 2019

KAIKOURA

ALL THE THINGS I DID IN KAIKOURA
That is a link. you press it.

I know it isn't much put are pictures of some of the stuff i did
there

WALES!!✌✌

WALES!!
By the way that is a link. you press it.

Thursday, August 1, 2019

persuasive writing advertisements 2.8.19

        Room 10 and 11 have been making advertisements in the past week for persuasive writing. My ad is for buying a fitbit to help the homeless people and homeless pets. If you buy a fitbit, you get a free pet! I think that making people feel sad and then giving them a price that they can afford, they will buy the product. I have picked the saddest pictures possible. Hope you like it!

Thursday, March 28, 2019

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