Kia ora, I am a student at Parkview Pārua School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, August 1, 2019
persuasive writing advertisements 2.8.19
1 comment:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post

hello taamia! I really like your persuasive writing now i really want a fitbit! I like all of the colors as well.I also made a persuasive writing post about saving street animals and stuff like that. Maybe next time you should use more punctuation?
ReplyDeleteDid your whole class do one?